Practice for writing #3

Today’s topic: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

I don’t think that food has become easier to prepare has change improved the way people live. In fact, preparing food become much easier and our society became more and more useful one than before, but there are some bad points, too.
By being easier to prepare food, the time that we use for cooking dishes gets shorter and this make women have more time that they can use freely. Getting the time shorter, women can work longer and get good position and surely. So they came to have opportunities to play important roles in the company and society. Some of the women can be still working after they have children because of decreasing of the time for preparing food. I don’t think this kind of women is bad. However, if they have children, the circumstances would be change.
Does these women really make the food that includes high nutrition as well as when they don’t have job? I don’t think so. Children will have foods that are already made by machines or other people who work at the supermarkets or department stores. Or, they may ask their mother to make supper for their children. If these foods include abundant nutrition and are good valance, that may not become big programs. However, I think mother should make supper themselves for children. It’s very sad that children don’t know mother’s tastes.
Another problem is first food restaurant. Shops like MacDonnell serve food very quickly and there are very convenient if we don’t have much time to eat. But these foods affect bad for our health. If those children eat hamburger every week at supper, what will happen?? These foods can fulfill your hungry feeling but can’t care their health at all. In the movie, “Super Size Me” improve what happen in the body if people eat hamburger every morning, lunch, evening.
Reducing the time preparing food increase people’s time, and it’s very good for every one who lives in busy society. But I don’t think it’s really important for us to exchange the time we can have and our precious health.